Happy ‘Nu’ Year4
January 6, 2016 by Lydia Syson
My New Year’s resolution should possibly be to work out how to exert better control over my headline images on WordPress…In fact, instead of website improvement, I’ve been preoccupied with 1950s home improvement at The History Girls this month, where I wonder if that whole decade wasn’t one big cover-up. The post – The Mastery of Knack – was inspired by a Christmas present, a copy of The Practical Householder of October 1956.
Steven Pinker’s The Sense of Style: The Thinking Person’s Guide to Writing in the 21st Century was another recent present, equally engrossing, and the perfect read for those of a logical yet rebellious disposition. Pinker’s approach is as practical as a DIY manual: he decisively demolishes the myth of an undying battle between language Prescriptivists and Descriptivists, and clears up after himself very well too. In my tutorials at The Courtauld where I’m a Royal Literary Fund Writing Fellow, I’ve already been finding the concept of prose-deadening ‘zombie nouns’ which he discusses here extremely useful. Pinker adopts this nickname for nominalizations from Helen Sword, citing her example: The proliferation of nominalizations in a discursive formation may be an indication of a tendency towards pomposity and abstraction. In other words, ‘Writers who overload their sentences with nouns derived from verbs and adjectives tend to sound pompous and abstract.’ His vigorous attack on the comma splice is extremely cheering. I will undoubtedly be recommending The Sense of Style on a weekly basis this term, and pillaging it frequently too. I resolve to worry less when I read ‘like’ instead of ‘as’ but – as a die-hard pedant – I’m sure I’ll retain my irrationally purist use of disinterested, hopefully, and enervate. And I definitely agree that unsplit infinitives usually simply sound better, even if they have no convincing grammatical justification.
The first working week of the year has brought a number of other unexpected pleasures: sneaking into the company of Elena Ferrante, Marlon James, Evie Wyld, Muriel Spark and others in Review bookshop’s list of Top Ten Bestsellers of 2015 (It’s official! Liberty’s Fire is a bestseller…in SE15, at least!); reading four different accounts of an 1867 shipwreck on a Polynesian coral reef in the London Missionary Society archives at SOAS; and seeing the glorious new cover proposed for the US edition of That Burning Summer which will be published by Sky Pony Press next January. A few tweaks in progress now, and all will soon be revealed.
This year is the 80th anniversary of the outbreak of the Spanish Civil War, and there are quite a few conferences on the subject coming up, including The Spanish Civil War and World Literatures in London in July, where I’ll be talking about the writing and reception of A World Between Us. I’m also looking forward to the Len Crome Memorial Conference this March which is about women in Spain – and particularly to Linda Palfreeman’s paper on Fernanda Jacobsen of the Scottish Ambulance Service (‘Samaritan or Spy?) Book your place here. Birkbeck’s Crossing Borders also looks promising.
My other new year’s resolution is to update my ‘further reading’ sections with more of the material that’s come out on all my various interests since the publication of my own books. Luc Sante’s The Other Paris could hardly be more up my street. The ultimate twenty-first-century flâneur, Sante (interviewed here in The Paris Review, and here last weekend in The Guardian) observes the underbelly of the city and the drift between past and present with a fine sense of style. Anything but nostalgic. Highly recommended.
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I am longing to know what a comma splice is, just so that I can eschew it; along with zombies and split infinitives. We learn to write with zombies when we have to produce, or review, management and policy documents. Indeed people have been known to enliven boring meetings by playing Zombie Bingo. Creative writing speaks a subtly different language
Ha! A comma splice is when two complete sentences, each of which could stand on their own, are joined (‘spliced’) with a comma. An example from Pinker: ‘There is no trail, visitors must hike up the creek bed.’ He says ‘…there are two reasons that comma splices drive careful readers crazy. (I won’t tolerate them in my students’ writing, not even in email.) They always create a garden path, distracting and annoying the reader. And they are easy to avoid, requiring no greater skill than the ability to identify a sentence.’ It’s not one of his best psycholinguistic explanations, but I think what he means is that the comma leads the reader to imagine a different kind of sentence is about to develop. I expect you naturally already eschew comma splices! Now I want to know how to play Zombie Bingo.
To play Zombie Bingo all you have to do is draw up two 3 by 4 score cards with predictable Zombie words or clichés. Level playing-field, elephants in rooms, interrogation of discourses, de-under-integration, and sit in the meeting with a friend waiting for them to come up. The one who gets a row first wins. It is important not to say Ha! too loudly when you score. The precise words will no doubt be different in different meetings. There are variants, for example bigger cards, but that is the basic game.
Brilliant. And no doubt lifesaving on occasion.